Next updates please!

Seunkings02:
I don't want to feel pity for jetar yet, I still believe she a secret mission unknown to addin

Underjoy is a story i get for my brain, but i never start writing at all... dropping an update now...

As Jetar is falling down, despite his body hurting so much, Addin flies at impossible speed, at an impossible angle and grabs Jetar in the air, and drops her on the ground. He is able to save Jetar from falling to the pit of acid. They both fall on the ground wounded. Addin is so much tired, and Jetar is so much unfit. Addin holds Jetar’s hands).
Addin: (in so much pain) We have to stand up and fight. We have all other days to rest and recuperate from our pains. But today, we have to fight.
Jetar: (so determined) Let’s do this. (they both hold each other’s hands, as they stand up in slow motion. Addin removes the enemies’ uniform on his body, and ties it around his waist. He is ready for the fight of his life. Jetar is looking at Enoph as she stands up. She feels so much hatred towards him. Apparently, it must had been Enoph that tortured her so much. She faces Enoph, while Addin faces Mr Nonk. It is time for the showdown).
Mr Nonk: (to Addin) You are wounded. You are unfit. You can’t fight in this your condition. Why don’t you just give up?
Addin: (smiles) I am sorry, but giving up isn’t in my option. It’s fight or die trying.
Enoph: (to Jetar) Even when you are totally fit, you can’t defeat me. With the condition you are currently in, I will kill you in less than a minute.
Jetar: You can try. (Jetar runs to Enoph, and Addin runs to Mr Nonk).
(As Jetar gets to Enoph, Enoph gives her repeated slaps that she is not able to dodge at all. He then gives her a heavy one that makes her fall down immediately. She forcefully stands up again and goes to meet him. Enoph continues to give her more slaps, and then gives her a heavy blow on her face. She falls down heavily, and is in much pain. Enoph moves to give her the last blow to finish her. But as he gets near her, she skillfully summersaults and gives Enoph a heavy kick with her leg on his face. Enoph moves back and Jetar faces him with a determined face. They begin to engage in fight with Enoph winning.
Addin rushes some blows to Mr Nonk, but Mr Nonk is able to dodge all his blows. Addin changes his attacks, but Mr Nonk is still able to dodge all easily. He then gives Addin a heavy kick. Addin moves back instantly. He continues to kick Addin, but Addin is just moving back to avoid the kicks. Noticing that Addin is moving back to his kicks, he skillfully rushes the kicks to Addin and Addin is not able to avoid them this time. He falls down heavily. He shakes his head due to the much pain he is feeling all over his body. He knows he is supposed to stop fighting, but not at this point. He will only get himself killed if he stops. He has to make sure he is not defeated. As Mr Nonk wants to kick him again, Addin grabs his leg, gives him a counterattack kick, and throws him away. Though Addin gets Mr Nonk this time, but the attack has very little effect on Mr Nonk. He angrily gives Addin revenge kicks that push Addin to the ground heavily. Addin is so much hurting, but he still stands up and faces him again.
Jetar is finally getting her skills up. Enoph is surprised at Jetar’s improved fights. Jetar is someone that he beats easily before. But Jetar is now fighting with him, as if they are of the same fighting skills. As Enoph is slapping Jetar, Jetar is slapping him back. As Enoph is kicking and punching her, Jetar is making sure to return them in folds. This makes Enoph to get angry, as he begins to fight with his best skills. Jetar is not able to cope with this, as Enoph is now able to beat her mercilessly. Jetar is now on the floor, like she can’t stand up again. She is in total pain.
Addin notices something. It’s that once Mr Nonk beats him, he uses his leg to kick him to one particular pillar. He repeats this, anytime he beats Addin. The history behind this is that, this particular room is the place Mr Nonk trains most. So, whenever he beats his men, he kicks them to that pillar. This has turned to be a habit for him. Addin puts himself up purposely to be beaten again to be sure of what he noticed. Again, Mr Nonk kicks him to the pillar. Now, Addin knows how to beat him.
Jetar flies up and continues to fight Enoph. She doesn’t want to be defeated by Enoph. She gathers his strength. She also notices something. Whenever Enoph notices that she is in pain, Enoph tries to always finish the fight, by rushing her immediately. Also, she now knows how to defeat Enoph.

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kudos bros! keep it � up

SilverSpoonEnt:
seriously, i pray God makes me as i want... i never write anything out of what i get for my brain... i still get much more interesting stories on my head, that i wanna type...only God knows tomorrow sha...

More wisdom and knowledge bro!

i wanna drop one last update tonight... i know people will kill me for this cos of where it stops... lol...

Jetar purposely let Enoph beat her. She then fakes being so tired. Enoph notices this and wants to end the fight immediately. As Enoph is rushing to meet her, she flies over the pit of acid. Enoph flies to follow her immediately. As she gets to the other side of the pit, she stays and returns Enoph back with a kick to the inside of pit. Enoph falls inside the pit. He cries out in agony, as his skin burns out painfully).
Enoph: (as his skin is burning inside the concentrated acid) Aaaaaaah! (Jetar heaves a heavy sigh).
(Addin uses style to kick a knife to the side of the pillar without Mr Nonk knowing. He then purposely let himself be beaten by Mr Nonk. As usual, after beating Addin to his satisfaction, Mr Nonk kicks him to the pillar. Addin purposely stays at the side of the pillar and begins to tremble like he is much pain. Mr Nonk is waiting for him to come back, but Addin won’t leave the place. Noticing this, Mr Nonk thinks Addin is now totally weak, and it’s time to finish the fight. As Mr Nonk flies over to meet Addin, Addin skillfully takes the knife and stakes it directly into Mr Nonk’s heart. This meets Mr Nonk unexpectedly. He is so surprised at this, and feels so much pain. Addin continues to push the knife inside of him more. He then uses the knife to break some muscles inside him, before forcefully withdrawing the knife. Mr Nonk goes down in pain.)
Mr Nonk: (he is in much pain) Aaaaah! You bastard. (Jetar and Addin look at themselves and smile).
Addin: That was for my father. (he picks the knife and stabs Mr Nonk again. Mr Nonk screams out in pain again). That was for my mother. And finally, this is for me. (as he wants to stab Mr Nonk, Mr Nonk shouts out).
Mr Nonk: The Peagries didn’t kill your parents. (Addin and Jetar are shocked to hear this, as Addin stops immediately).
Addin: (pretty shocked) What?
Mr Nonk: The Peagries wasn’t responsible for your parent’s death. It wasn’t us.

It wasn't the peagries? Are u shitting me?

There you go again..... suspense full this story and i like that, c'mon I LOVE THIS
Oya another update oga mi

chai bro u don come again Oo....why this suspense nahhhh .u wan kill person...oya come Nd feed us more

oya... i'm dropping soon

i don get the next update... but i want more comments to roll in before dropping... oya keep them coming...

Jetar, in a secret mission? Peagries didn't kill Addin's parents? Is that man 'Nonks' trying to fool sombori? After Luto has agreed with a story to back up the suspicion? Now he's here talking crap? Okz maybe before Addin settles to listen to the freaking story he should stay rooms away from that acid bath and then be 100% on guard, criminal na criminal, don't let down ur guard!

Interesting piece indeed... Update pls..

Addin: (still so shocked) Are you saying that to save your own life?
Mr Nonk: If I wanted to save my life, I would have told you right from the start. You just killed the innocent Peagries. You are so foolish. You believe you are wise, but your revenge has overclowded your wisdom.
Addin: What the hell are you saying? (so confused) Even the other peagries confirmed that it was you four that killed my parents.
Mr Nonk: Yeah! That’s because I was the one that ordered the assassination, not them.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Stunt: Then, order it.
Cylin: Yeah, do. I’m in full support.
Nonk: She has told her husband about us. And we don’t know if her son is also aware.
Stunt: All of them are expendable. The fact that she is taking her son brain training makes it seems as if it’s because of us.
Nonk: Good. (he picks up his phone, and makes a call) It’s me… Assassination… A plux EX mission… Target; Nidda… Meet me for full details.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Nonk: I called Biggie and gave him the full details. He was there when your mum was killed. If you could remember, there was a fat man in a brown car the police mistakenly tracked instead of yours.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Police officer: (as they move closer to the brownish car) I don’t think this is the boy’s car.
Police 1: What do you mean?
Police officer: I actually shot the car, and this car doesn’t seem like one that has been shot.
Police 1: (notices this) Yeah! You are somehow right. (he runs quickly towards the car only to find a fat man inside the car. He then connects back on comm.) What’s the meaning of this? (no reply for some seconds).
Police 2: (now replies) Yeah! Yeah!! I think we’ve been fooled.
Police 1: What are you trying to say?
Police 2: I am not sure what the boy did, but he actually did something that made me to be tracking another car unknowingly.
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: (confused) The police were saying I used him to cover up for myself, but I didn’t do anything.
Mr Nonk: Yeah, you didn’t. That was Biggie, he was the one I sent to assassinate your mum. He followed you right from your house. He was to follow her to her office. He would shoot her immediately she steps out of the car to move into the office. He was also surprised to see her change direction, so he followed her to the scene where she was killed.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Mr Nonk: (on phone) Is she dead?
Biggie: (also on phone) Yeah, she is. But it wasn’t me.
Mr Nonk: What the hell are you talking about?
Biggie: A policeman shot her.
Mr Nonk: (shocked) A policeman?
Biggie: Yeah. But I am very sure he was sent to. He had no reason to kill her, because she was already about to leave the scene. He purposely shot her. I made sure to snap the face of the policeman when he rolled his mask.
Mr Nonk: Send the picture to me.
Biggie: I will, now.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Nonk: It wasn’t us. You only took your revenge on The Peagries for nothing.
Addin: (he and Jetar are so confused. He begins to cry heavily. He is so confused) The fat man was later reported dead, but I didn’t kill him.
O O O O O
(flashback)
“The next day, newspaper headline”
A fat man was found dead inside a brown car. Majh, the ambassador’s son was said to have used the man and his car to fool the police officers once. So he killed the man to cover his evil deeds.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Nonk: Before sending him on the mission, I gave him a time poison. I gave him the poison so he would die hours after completing the mission. I decided on purpose not to tell the others, since Nidda and Cole are dead, and that’s what we wanted.
Addin: (Addin cries out heavily as he realizes that Mr Nonk is really saying the truth) Ah! I am so foolish.
Jetar: (holds him) You don’t have to believe. He could be lying.
Addin: (still crying as he goes on his knees) No, he is not. I failed. I was supposed to look for only one person, but I killed four people.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Majh: (still crying) Mum, what’s it?
Mrs Cole: (looks at Majh, straight in the eyes) Yesterday, when you said you felt someone’s presence in the room, were you really sure about it?
Majh: Yes, I know I felt something.
Mrs Cole: (looks sad) Can that be true? But there is only one person that can breach my security.
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: I failed woefully.
Mr Nonk: You were blinded by revenge, and used your brain in a wrong way. You may seem wise, but you are the most foolish being on earth.
Addin: (still on his knees) Please show me the picture of the policeman that shot my mum.
Mr Nonk: (he smiles as he knows he is dying) I destroyed the picture after I saw it. I know the person that shot your mum, but I don’t know who sent him.
Addin: Please, who was it? (he cries out loudly).
Mr Nonk: It was the person that helped you to initiate this mission right from the beginning. (he falls down and dies).
Addin: (confused) Mr Dart?
O O O O O
(flashback)
(At the scene. Young Dart rolls down his mask, as Biggie snaps him from inside his car).
O O O O O
(back)
(Addin cries heavily, holding Mr Nonk’s body and shaking it. He is begging him not to die. He has things to ask him. He is confused at this point. He has wasted all his life chasing The Peagries, and they are not even responsible for his parents’ death. He has failed himself. He has failed his parents. He used his brain and abilities wrongly. He doesn’t know what to do. Jetar drags him up, and tells him that they have to leave. Addin gathers up his courage to leave the place.
As he and Jetar are moving outside, the remaining Peagries’ members start to bow for him. There’s no one else to lead them. Addin singlehandledly took out all their leaders. He is now the rightful heir to the throne. He is their new leader.
Addin moves out with Jetar, in slow motion, knowing fully well he is now the leader of The Peagries’ Organization. He now has to use The Peagries to find and eliminate the only one person. He now has to use The Peagries to find the real person that killedhis mum).

Calm down, Biggie didn't kill Nidda, that I can understand. But who killed Cole? Isn't it same Biggie? Hmmm...

Favyo:
Calm down, Biggie didn't kill Nidda, that I can understand. But who killed Cole? Isn't it same Biggie? Hmmm...

lol... Biggie wasn't sent to kill Cole at all... He was sent to kill Nidda... To Nonk then, Nidda was the threat... so once Nidda is out, Cole is very simple for them... Biggie got to the crime scene exact time Nidda got there... so Cole had been killed before the two got there... do you understand now?

hmmmm, nawa ooo.

op Weldon ooo

what a wonderful story u av got here mem....carry on I gat ur back.....more food plss

mmm,cant wait for the next, Weldon

Yea, i do now, thanks for explaining

SilverSpoonEnt:

lol... Biggie wasn't sent to kill Cole at all... He was sent to kill Nidda... To Nonk then, Nidda was the threat... so once Nidda is out, Cole is very simple for them... Biggie got to the crime scene exact time Nidda got there... so Cole had been killed before the two got there... do you understand now?

Now I'm wondering why the hell they didn't tell all these to Addin when they knew he was looking out for them? Or maybe they underestimated him huh? Now why call him foolish like it had all been clear enough for him to see and yet didn't?

Favyo:
Now I'm wondering why the hell they didn't tell all these to Addin when they knew he was looking out for them? Or maybe they underestimated him huh? Now why call him foolish like it had all been clear enough for him to see and yet didn't?

lol... only Mr Nonk knew about this... also, if you were in Mr Nonk's shoes, and in the higher-ups, you would realize that you can't reveal a secret you've been keeping just like that because you're scared of one boy... you will just be like your men should take care of the boy and end of story... he only got to reveal the secret at the end to tell Addin that he is so wrong...

nice updates.. Mr dart is dead ,that means adding is going for his daughter or maybe MT darts fakes his own death.. what do u think tracrberry?

Hmmm

Hmm! Mission Impossible in view.... Nice one

Am suspecting Jetar has secret connection with the death of his parents.... Next update please

bro give us more update nahhhh[b][/b][color=#990000][/color]

i want to cause fight... do you wanna know the mysteries behind his parent's death? do you wanna know what happened to him? all are contained in the next two scenes... i want 50 comments before uploading them... not pride o, just wanna see if i can get ni...

Ahhhhhhhh @silverspoon the suspense is killing nau OK..... u pple should comment and let him update oooo I af said my own

people no wan comment... ok, lemme give you the taste of the show that's about to go down...